What’s the most memorable vacation you’ve had?
학생이 쓴 원문
My most memorable vacation is summer vacation in 2014. My husband and I visited a friend who living in Frankfurt in Germany.
I was impressed by the clean road of Germany. We went to Amsterdam. Unlike Germany, There was a dirty city.
Finally, we visited Prague, Czech republic. Prague was a beautiful city. It was famous for glass work. So we bought special wine glasses.
However, the wine glasses were broken a few year ago. So, I was sad.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ms. [Name]! That sounds like such a great trip! Germany must have been so clean, and Prague sounds gorgeous with all its glasswork. Too bad the wine glasses broke, but the memories you made are priceless.
~T. Jenna
My most memorable vacation is summer vacation in 2014.
>>My most memorable vacation was my summer vacation in 2014.
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>>My most memorable vacation took place in the summer of 2014.
My husband and I visited a friend who living in Frankfurt in Germany.
>>My husband and I visited a friend who was living in Frankfurt, Germany.
>>My husband and I visited a friend who was living in Frankfurt, Germany.
I was impressed by the clean road of Germany.
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>>I was amazed by how clean the streets in Germany were.
We went to Amsterdam.
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>>After that, we traveled to Amsterdam.
Unlike Germany, There was a dirty city.
>>Unlike Germany, Amsterdam was quite a dirty city.
>>Unlike Germany, Amsterdam was quite a dirty city.
Finally, we visited Prague, Czech republic.
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>>Finally, we went to Prague in the Czech Republic.
Prague was a beautiful city. It was famous for glass work.
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>>Prague was stunning and well-known for its beautiful glasswork.
So we bought special wine glasses.
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>>So, we bought some unique wine glasses as souvenirs.
However, the wine glasses were broken a few year ago.
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>>Sadly, the wine glasses got broken a few years ago.
So, I was sad.
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>>I was really sad when that happened.
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