What\'s the most memorable weekend have you had in the past years?

2023-01-31 · 첨삭 강사 Tricia

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Absolutely when I was going to fishing with my dad. I used to do it together, but not anymore because I don\'t have much time as I\'m getting older. So nowadays the thing that I really miss is doing it. It\'s an way to communicate with each other.

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Hello, [이름] [이름]! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)

~ Teacher Tricia


Absolutely when I was going to fishing with my dad. 
>>> Absolutely, when I was going fishing with my dad.

I used to do it together, but not anymore because I don\'t have much time as I\'m getting older. 
>>> CORRECT!

So nowadays the thing that I really miss is doing it. 
>>> CORRECT!

It\'s an way to communicate with each other.
>>> It\'s a way to communicate with each other.

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