What’s the most memorable weekend have you had in the past years?

2019-06-12 · 첨삭 강사 May

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I had a family trip early this year to the Okinawa in Japan with my parents. It was first time for my father to go abroad and take an airplane. The preparations were perfect that I have booked a plane, hotels and rental car correctly. However, we have lost our bags that contained goods we bought in the tax free shop in Incheon airport while we were in immigration. We could not remember where we lost our belongings, so we just went to car rental shop and asked staff in rental shop who could speak Japanese to call the department which keep lost bags. But unfortunately, staff in the airport told that he didn\'t find any bags like we described. I have thought that we couldn\'t find our bag. When my thoughts reached this point, we would travel the places that we planned rather than trying to find lost bag. However, I couldn\'t put it out of my mind, so then I went to the airport and found out that the lost and found department was not the one I called day ago. The person in charge informed

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I think that was really memorable to you! I will tell you my memorable weekend later.

Thanks for sharing [이름]! ^^

~~Teacher May~~

I had a family trip early this year to the Okinawa in Japan with my parents.

>> I had a family trip earlier this year to Okinawa, Japan.

It was first time for my father to go abroad and take an airplane.

>> It was my father\'s first time to take an airplane and to go abroad.

The preparations were perfect that I have booked a plane, hotels and rental car correctly.

>> The preparations were perfect because I have booked a plane ticket, hotels room and rental car properly.

However, we have lost our bags that contained goods we bought in the tax free shop in Incheon airport while we were in immigration.

>> However, we have lost our bags that contained goods we bought FROM the tax free shop in Incheon airport while we were in immigration.

We could not remember where we lost our belongings, so we just went to car rental shop and asked staff in rental shop who could speak Japanese to call the department which keep lost bags.

>> We could not remember where we lost our belongings, so we just went to the car rental shop and asked the staff, who could speak Japanese, to call an agent who keeps lost bags.

But unfortunately, staff in the airport told that he didn\'t find any bags like we described.

>> But unfortunately, the staff in the airport told that he didn\'t find any bags.

I have thought that we couldn\'t find our bag.

>> I have thought that we wouldn\'t be able to find our bag.

When my thoughts reached this point, we would travel the places that we planned rather than trying to find lost bag. 

>> When my thoughts reached this point, we would travel the places that we planned rather than trying to find THE lost bag. 
 However, I couldn\'t put it out of my mind, so then I went to the airport and found out that the lost and found department was not the one I called day ago.

>>  However, I couldn\'t put it out of my mind. I went back to the airport and found out that the lost and found department was not the one I called.

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