What\'s the most memorable winter vacation you have had?
학생이 쓴 원문
When I was young, I visited my grandmother\'s house. that was a countryside. so my grandmother and uncle bred many animals like dogs, cows, chickens.
One snowy day, my uncle took a ride me a dogs sleigh.
강사 첨삭
Hi! I\'m so pleased you took the time to complete the homework. You did an excellent job sharing your experiences and ideas—keep up the great work!^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^
When I was young, I visited my grandmother\'s house. that was a countryside.
>> When I was young, I visited my grandmother\'s house in the countryside.
so my grandmother and uncle bred many animals like dogs, cows, chickens.
>> My grandmother and uncle raised many animals, such as dogs, cows, and chickens.
One snowy day, my uncle took a ride me a dogs sleigh.
>> One snowy day, my uncle gave me a ride on a dog sled.
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