What\'s the most miserable you\'ve been?
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Hello [이름]!
Thank you for doing your homework. :)
I understand that English could be really difficult.
But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.
You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^
Xoxo,
T. Christina ^^
Here are my corrections for you:
I have been through many failures, but I think the most recent experience was in a Chinese writing class.
>> I have been through many failures, but I think my most recent experience was in a Chinese writing class.
Our class members had to take a test to memorize some words.
>> CORRECT!
I put a lot of effort into learning for 3 hours the day before the test.
>> I put a lot of effort into studying for 3 hours the day before the test.
It was a system to stand up one by one and take the test with words.
>> It was a system where we need to stand up one by one and say the words.
I was more nervous than necessary, and suddenly forgot everything I memorized.
>> CORRECT!
My head became white in my turn, and I finally couldn\'t answer the question. And this was my most miserable experience recently.
>> My face turned white when it was my turn and I couldn\'t answer the question.
And this was my most miserable experience recently.
>> This was my most miserable experience recently.
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