What\'s the most popular cold drink among children your age? Explain.
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I think the most popular cold drink among children is mango smoothie, Slush and coke.
Mango smoothie is sweet, slush is sweet and Fresh and coke is refreshing taste
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What\'s the most popular cold drink among children your age? Explain.
I think the most popular cold drink among children is mango smoothie, Slush and coke.
>> I think the most popular cold drinks among children are mango smoothies, Slush, and Coke.
Mango smoothie is sweet, slush is sweet and Fresh and coke is refreshing taste
>> Mango smoothie is sweet, slush is sweet and fresh, and Coke has a refreshing taste.
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