What\'s the most popular section of the hypermarket? Why?
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I think the most popular section of the hypermarket is food section because food section is most important of people.
So food section is very most important.
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What\'s the most popular section of the hypermarket? Why?
I think the most popular section of the hypermarket is food section because food section is most important of people.
>> I think the most popular section of the hypermarket is the food section because it is the most important for people.
So food section is very most important.
>> So the food section is the most important.
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