What\'s the most popular toy you know? Write about it.
학생이 쓴 원문
I think the most popular toy is Lego.
Lego was made in Denmark.
Lego is block, Lego has many series.
강사 첨삭
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What\'s the most popular toy you know? Write about it.
I think the most popular toy is Lego.
>> OR: I believe the most popular one is Lego.
Lego was made in Denmark.
>> OR: Legos are manufactured by the Lego Group, a company based in Denmark.
Lego is block, Lego has many series.
>> Lego is a block and has many series.
>> OR: Lego is a line of plastic construction toys.
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