What’s the most recent thing you did that improved your mood?
학생이 쓴 원문
I took a trip in Vietnam lastweek.
I was suffered many stressful issues.
However, I forgot at the resort and beach.
강사 첨삭
Hi there! I’m so pleased you completed the homework. You did an excellent job sharing your thoughts and ideas—keep up the great work!^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^
I took a trip in Vietnam lastweek.
>> I took a trip to Vietnam last week.
I was suffered many stressful issues.
>> I went through many stressful issues.
However, I forgot at the resort and beach.
>> However, I was able to forget them at the resort and beach.
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