What’s the most unforgettable experience you’ve had with your friends?
학생이 쓴 원문
I usually meet to eat meal , hiking,playing golf or just chatting.
Last weekend, I went to go backpaking in the moutain with my SNS friends for the second time.
I slept from nine to six in my tent alone.my tent is yellow color and very cute.
I loved where am I in my tent also I felt very well after sleeping in the moutain.
It was the most memorable experience.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Ju Mi! I must say, you had a very fun backpacking trip with your friends. I can imagine how much you enjoyed sleeping alone in your tent. Thank you for sharing this memorable experience. ^^ Have a great day!
~T. Jewel
I usually meet to eat meal , hiking,playing golf or just chatting.
>>I usually meet my friends to eat meals, go hiking, play golf, or just chat.
Last weekend, I went to go backpaking in the moutain with my SNS friends for the second time.
>>Last weekend, I went backpacking in the mountains with my SNS friends for the second time.
I slept from nine to six in my tent alone.
I slept from nine to six in my tent alone.
>>CORRECT
my tent is yellow color and very cute.
>>My tent is yellow and very cute.
I loved where am I in my tent also I felt very well after sleeping in the moutain.
I loved where am I in my tent also I felt very well after sleeping in the moutain.
>>I loved being in my tent, and I felt very good after sleeping in the mountains.
It was the most memorable experience
It was the most memorable experience
>>It was the most memorable experience I’ve ever had.
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