What\'s the silliest holiday you\'ve heard of? Why?
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I suppose the silliest holiday I\'ve ever heard of is \'spaghetti day\' because many people eat spaghetti as a casual food. And many people can have spaghetti whenever they want because it is not expensive. And I don\'t think spaghetti day has a great effect on people\'s behavior on that day.
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Jean~~
I suppose the silliest holiday I\'ve ever heard of is \'spaghetti day\' because many people eat spaghetti as a casual food.
>> OR: If I were to pick one, I\'d say it\'s \'spaghetti day\' since many people eat it as a casual food and it\'s even a staple food for some.
And many people can have spaghetti whenever they want because it is not expensive.
>>OR: Also, spaghetti is affordable, which makes it available to many people.
And I don\'t think spaghetti day has a great effect on people\'s behavior on that day.
>> OR: On top of that, I honestly don\'t believe that spaghetti can greatly affect people\'s behavior.
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