What’s the toughest decision you ever made?
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The toughtest decision I made was changing my business category completely.
>> The toughest decision I made was changing my business category completely.
I was a office worker in public agency, but now I am woking at oriental medical clinic.
>> I was an office worker in a public agency, but now I am working at an oriental medical clinic.
An office clerk didn\'t fit me, and I wanted to find something more active.
>> Being an office clerk didn\'t fit me, and I wanted to find something more active.
OR>> Being an office clerk didn\'t fit me, so I wanted to find a more engaging job.
Consequently, I enjoy new work and I think it is suited for my personality.
>> Consequently, I enjoy my new work and I think it suits my personality.
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