What\'s the typical weather in summer in your country? what are your thoughts on the weather in summ
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It is hot and rainy in summer in my country.
And I thought very bad on the weather because appear many mosquitoes.
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What\'s the typical weather in summer in your country? What are your thoughts on the weather in summer?
It is hot and rainy in summer in my country.
>> CORRECT~~
>> OR: Korea has a hot and rainy summer.
And I thought very bad on the weather because appear many mosquitoes.
>> And I don\'t like this weather because many mosquitoes would appear.
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