What's the weirdest thing you ever ate? What did it taste like?
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Hi there my dear [이름] ho!
Thank you so much for making your homework!
I appreciate your effort.
However, it would have been better if you tried to expand your sentences and made a longer composition.
Anyway, below are my corrections. I hope that you\'ll go over them.
If you have questions, please raise them in class tomorrow, okay?
Have a great night!
~Teacher Shanee
What\'s the weirdest thing you ever ate? What did it taste like?
It is garlic.
>>Correct!
>>Or: The most weirdest thing I ever ate is garlic.
I ate it when i was twelve years old,
>>I ate it when I was twelve years old.
it was terrible;
>>It was terrible.
>>Or: The taste was terrible.
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