What’s the worst commercial you’ve recently seen? Why is it so bad?
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I don\'t watch so much television, but I usually get a information and enjoy movies and TV Dramas via the Internet.
>> I don\'t watch television that much. However, I usually I enjoy watching movies and dramas via internet. I also read information/news from there at the same time.
It is the worst commercial about diet pills ad is popular in internet web site. That ads do claim to be a panacea that will instantly transform you into a different person.
>> I watched the worst commercial about diet pills in the internet . The diet pills claims to be a panacea/remedy that will instantly transform you into a different person.
The pills might reduce weight in a short period of time but they can be harmful to the health. Furthermore, people quickly gain back the weight when they stop taking the pill.
>> It reduces your weight in a short period of time but it can be harmful to your health. Furthermore if you stop taking the pills, you will gain your weight back quickly.
Through physical exercise and dietary control, people can maintain a healthy weight!
>> I think that through physical exercise and dietary control, you can maintain a healthy weight.
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