What’s the worst shopping experience you’ve had?

2019-11-25 · 첨삭 강사 Louise

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I bought a sweater online. The color of the clothes was good online, and the quality too. Although the delivery was late, I had expectations. By the way, the product I saw when I arrived was different from my expectation. Not only the color but also the quality was too bad. So since then, I don\'t buy clothes well online.

강사 첨삭


I bought a sweater online.
>> CORRECT.

The color of the clothes was good online, and the quality too.
>> CORRECT.

Although the delivery was late, I had expectations.
>> CORRECT.

By the way, the product I saw when I arrived was different from my expectation.
>> CORRECT.

Not only the color but also the quality was too bad.
>> Not only the color but also the quality was so bad.

So since then, I don\'t buy clothes well online.
>>  So since then, I never bought clothes online again.

Thank you for doing your Homework. [이름]!
Great Job!
~ T. Louise ♥♥

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