What’s the worst shopping experience you’ve had?
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I did a sweater shopping online a year ago.
The photo of the sweater online was fascinating to me.
The quality looked good and the color was good. Especially, the price was so good.
But after delivery, I am very disappointed.
I thought the garbage was delivered.
Unlike what I saw online, the color was different, and the quality was even worse.
Since then, I don\'t buy it online.
강사 첨삭
I did a sweater shopping online a year ago.
>> I bought a sweater online a year ago.
The photo of the sweater online was fascinating to me.
>> CORRECT
The quality looked good and the color was good. Especially, the price was so good.
>> CORRECT
But after delivery, I am very disappointed.
>> But after it was delivered, I was very disappointed.
I thought the garbage was delivered.
>> CORRECT
Unlike what I saw online, the color was different, and the quality was even worse.
>> CORRECT
Since then, I don\'t buy it online.
>> CORRECT
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