What’s the worst thing about having a lot of clothes?
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Hi, Yeong^^
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If you have a lot of clothes, you have to know about how to wash of different types clothes, in addition you should have room at house and buy several different types clothes storages, you also should pay too much money for clothes and spend time for choose clothes, besides you regret buying clothes which don’t fit it.
>> If you have a lot of clothes, you have to know about how to wash of different types of clothes, in addition to that you should have a room in your house to store it and you should buy several different types clothes storages, you should also pay too much money for your clothes and spend time to choose your clothes and besides you will regret to buy more clothes because you can\'t even wear it anymore
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