What\'s the worst type of fashion you know? Write about it.
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I think tight-fitting fashion is the worst, because it is very uncomfortable and unhealthy.
I feel like snakes are wrapping my body.
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What\'s the worst type of fashion you know? Write about it.
I think tight-fitting fashion is the worst, because it is very uncomfortable and unhealthy.
>> I think tight-fitting fashion is the worst because it is very uncomfortable and unhealthy.
I feel like snakes are wrapping my body.
>> I feel like snakes are wrapping around my body.
>> OR: It feels like snakes are wrapped around my body.
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