What's up ???

2014-12-10 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

학생이 쓴 원문

carefully. badly nervous well great angry pretty well happy great gentle heavy good silly softly warm. Whole of my classmates and students know my cant phrase. Everyone copy that,and some friends lie that they made that words. My phrases are What's up? and Wrob ven dem. Actually,Rog Van dam is a famous player around the WWE that I most like.(I like to watch Wrestling.HiHiHi~). In fact Rob Van Dam is not my phrase,I just spread whole of the school. and my classmates think "Oh I know this guy.He is famous for a Rob Van Dam.

강사 첨삭

Happy hump day, Tom ^^

You got me there!  Hahaha.

I thought Rob Van Dam is your phrase.

Thank you for doing your homework.

I am so happy that you do all of it on time.

I hope that you are learning a lot from your exercises.

You always make me smile and laugh in class. ^^

Thanks for being the one of the best students I have.

Tell me more about your phrases in class.
Good night! Sweet dreams.
Please share your feelings and concerns in class.
Teacher Nina


carefully.
>> correct
badly

>> correct
nervous

>> correct
well
>> correct

great
>> correct

angry
>> angrily

pretty

>> correct
well

>> correct
happy
>> correct

great

>> correct
gentle

>> gently
heavy
>> correct

good
>> correct

silly
>> correct

softly

>> soft
warm.
>> correct



Whole of my classmates and students know my cant phrase.

>> Did you mean: All of my classmates don\'t know who to make a phrase. 

>> OR: All of the students don\'t know what phrase means.
Everyone copy that,and some friends lie that they made that words.

>> Everyone copied it and some friends lied that they made those words.
My phrases are What\'s up? and Wrob ven dem.

>> My phrases were, \"What\'s up? and Wrob ven dem.\"

>> My phrase was, \'What\'s up? and Rob Van Dam\". ( Actually, that is considered a sentence and Rob Van Dam is a noun. Let us talk about this tomorrow in class. ^^)
Actually,Rog Van dam is a famous player around the WWE that I most like.(I like to watch Wrestling.HiHiHi~).

>> Actually, Rob Van Dam is a famous player in WWE. I like watching wrestling.
In fact Rob Van Dam is not my phrase,I just spread whole of the school.

>> In fact, Rob Van Dam is not my phrase, I just said it in school. 
And my classmates think \"Oh I know this guy.

>> And my classmates said, \"Oh! I know that guy\".

He is famous for a Rob Van Dam.

>> Rob Van Dam is famous.

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