What's wrong with this?

Hello Debby I don't absolutely know what is wrong with this homework! I surely did this day's homework. I'm really surprised by what it's not done yet. It's not lie, you know. I remmember that I wrote my thought about "spam mail" before. Anyway, what' important is that it's not done yet, so I'm writing this again. I couldn't take your call on time, and this isn't finished... I think I need to be careful today. It feels not good. <Essay> I wrote like "spam mail" should be illegal. Because it isn't what I want to take from someone else, it invades our privacy. How could they get our phone number? I did never agree with you can send me a mail what I don't want to. So any person who send a spam mail should be punished by law!

Hi there [이름]!^^ Thank you so much for sending your response!^ It is truly bothering to receive spam mail! It\'s useless sometimes and just takes the space of our emails. What do you do with your spam mail? It\'s inconvinient right? So, like you I also agree that it must be outlawed for the sake of the privacy of people.^^ Take care! T.Debby^^ Here are my corrections for you today: Hello Debby>> CORRECT OR> Hi Debby^^I don\'t absolutely know what is wrong with this homework! >> CORRECT OR> I\'m not so sure what is wrong with this task.I surely did this day\'s homework. >> CORRECT Or> I was sure I did it.  I\'m really surprised by what it\'s not done yet. >> I\'m really surprised that it\'s not done yet. It\'s not lie, you know. >> CORRECT OR> I\'m not lying.  I remmember that I wrote my thought about \"spam mail\" before. >> I remember that I wrote my thought about \"spam mail\" before.Anyway, what\' important is that it\'s not done yet, so I\'m writing this again. >> Anyway, whats\' important is that it\'s not done yet, so I\'m writing this again.  I couldn\'t take your call on time, and this isn\'t finished... I think I need to be careful today. >> CORRECT OR> I didnt have class with you and this isn\'t done yet. I think I must be careful today.  It feels not good. >> It doesn\'t feel good.I wrote like \"spam mail\" should be illegal. >> CORRECT OR> I wrote that \"spam mail\" must be controlled by the law.  Because it isn\'t what I want to take from someone else, it invades our privacy >> CORRECT Or> It\'s an nvasion of privacy when I get it from somebody unwanted.  How could they get our phone number? >> CORRECT OR> How can they get our contacts?  I did never agree with you can send me a mail what I don\'t want to. >> I never did agree with with somebody that can send me unwanted mail. So any person who send a spam mail should be punished by law! >> So any person who sends spam mail should be punished by law!