What’s your all-time favorite movie?
학생이 쓴 원문
My all-time favorit movie is \"scent of a women\".It is old movie.
The reading act is Al Pacino and I saw three times the movie.
Al Pacino\'s acting blind was really excellent.The movie is famous for \"tango\".
I thoughrt I during watch the movie,I want to dance \"tango\"
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ju Mi! You must have enjoyed this movie a lot since you\'ve watched it three times. It seems like an interesting movie. Thank you for sharing this in your homework. Have a great day today!
~T. Jewel
My all-time favorit movie is \"scent of a women\".
>>My all-time favorite movie is \'Scent of a Woman\'.
It is old movie.
>> It is an old movie.
The reading act is Al Pacino and I saw three times the movie.
The reading act is Al Pacino and I saw three times the movie.
>>The actor is Al Pacino, and I have seen the movie three times.
Al Pacino\'s acting blind was really excellent.
Al Pacino\'s acting blind was really excellent.
>>Al Pacino\'s acting as a blind man was really excellent.
The movie is famous for \"tango\".
>>The movie is famous for its \'tango\' scene.
I thoughrt I during watch the movie,I want to dance \"tango\"
I thoughrt I during watch the movie,I want to dance \"tango\"
>>I thought that while watching the movie, I wanted to dance the tango.
OR
>>While watching the movie, I found myself wanting to dance the tango.
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