What\'s your best travel story?
학생이 쓴 원문
My best trevel is visit to Singapore.
I went to the singapore on a school project. at first i unexpected that the trip was very useful for me. but I can learn about Coexistence of culture when I stayed there.
강사 첨삭
Wow! I like to learn more about your experience in Singapore in our class, [이름].
Thank you for doing your homework!
~Teacher Eve.
My best trevel is visit to Singapore.
>> My best travel moment was when I visited Singapore.
I went to the singapore on a school project.
>> Correct!
at first i unexpected that the trip was very useful for me.
>> Firstly, the trip was unexpectedly very useful for me.
but I can learn about Coexistence of culture when I stayed there.
>> Correct!
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