What’s your dream offer that would make you drop everything and say ‘yes’?
학생이 쓴 원문
Maybe it would be travel.
I would like to travel the world.
I am getting old so I want to go all over the world.
I have a dream, I will go much travel during the next ten years .
I\'going to work hard and make money .
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ju Mi! That sounds amazing! I hope you get to visit many incredible places! ^^ Thank you for always doing your homework. Have a great Tuesday!
~T. Jewel
Maybe it would be travel.
>>Maybe it would be traveling.
OR
>>Maybe it would be the opportunity to travel.
I would like to travel the world.
I would like to travel the world.
>>CORRECT
I am getting old so I want to go all over the world.
I am getting old so I want to go all over the world.
>>I’m getting older, so I want to travel all over the world.
I have a dream, I will go much travel during the next ten years.
I have a dream, I will go much travel during the next ten years.
>>I dream of traveling a lot over the next ten years.
I\'going to work hard and make money.
>>I\'m going to work hard and make money.
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