What’s your dream vacation? Why? Explain your answer in not more than 5 sentences.
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My dream vacation is going to Australia. because I want to travel with my family. and we never visit Austalia. also, Australis is a very nice place to visit.
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My dream vacation is going to Australia. because I want to travel with my family. and we never visit Austalia. also, Australis is a very nice place to visit.
>> My dream vacation is a trip to Australia because I want to travel there with my family and we have never visited Australia. Also, Australia is a very nice place to visit.
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