What\"s your favorite about your home country?
학생이 쓴 원문
My home country, Korea, is surround by the sea with three sides.
There are four different seasons.
So we enjoy differential scenery on each season ; summer,winter, fall,spring.
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My home country, Korea, is surround by the sea with three sides.
>> My home country, Korea, is surrounded by the sea on three sides.
There are four different seasons.
There are four different seasons.
>> Correct
So we enjoy differential scenery on each season ; summer,winter, fall,spring.
So we enjoy differential scenery on each season ; summer,winter, fall,spring.
>> That\'s why we can enjoy different kinds of scenery in each season: summer, winter, fall and spring.
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