What\'s your favorite movie genre? Why?
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My favorite movie genre is Korean historical movie because I like Korean history.
My favorite Korean historical movie is \"Myungryang\", the movie\'s main [이름]racter is admiral Yi Sun-shin.
But there are not many Korean historical movies, so it\'s too bad.
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Good evening, Jimmy!
Here\'s your revised composition from Wednesday\'s homework. I appreciate your sending it. Please go over the revisions given below, such as capitalizing the word \"Admiral\" when it is used as the title of a person. Good night!
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What\'s your favorite movie genre? Why?
My favorite movie genre is Korean historical movie because I like Korean history.
>> My favorite movie genre is the Korean historical kind because I like Korean history.
My favorite Korean historical movie is \"Myungryang\", the movie\'s main [이름]racter is admiral Yi Sun-shin.
>> My favorite Korean historical movie is \"Myungryang\" with Admiral Yi Sun-shin as the main [이름]racter.
But there are not many Korean historical movies, so it\'s too bad.
>> But there are not many Korean historical movies, so it\'s disappointing.
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