What’s your favorite park and why?
학생이 쓴 원문
My favorite park is the citizen park in busan because it is good nature,and there are many tree in the park.
The citizen park in busan are very clean and wild.
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My favorite park is the citizen park in busan because it is good nature,and there are many tree in the park.
>> My favorite park is the Citizen park in Busan because it has good nature, and there are many trees in its surrounding.
The citizen park in busan are very clean and wild.
>> The Citizen park in Busan is very clean and wild.
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