What’s your favorite part of having a friend stay over at your house?
학생이 쓴 원문
When my friends or siblings stay over at my house, I always I preper various food a lot of fruit ane wine.
They really love my dishes ,we usually chat untill nighr.
I like these time also I am feeling happy.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ju Mi! I could imagine a fun, exciting night! ^^ Thank you for sharing your insights. Always take care and stay warm.
~T. Jewel
When my friends or siblings stay over at my house, I always I preper various food a lot of fruit ane wine.
>>When my friends or siblings stay over at my house, I always prepare various foods, a lot of fruit, and wine.
They really love my dishes ,we usually chat untill nighr.
They really love my dishes ,we usually chat untill nighr.
>>They really love my dishes, and we usually chat until night.
I like these time also I am feeling happy.
I like these time also I am feeling happy.
>>I like these times, and I am also feeling happy.
OR
>>I enjoy these moments and feel happy, too.
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