What\'s your favorite season and why?

2021-02-04 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

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I like the season is Winter. because I am weak the heat. and I really hate a rain. In my country, a plenty of rain in summer. So, I like the winter.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

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T. [이름]tina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:


I like the season is Winter.

>> I like the winter season.
because I am weak the heat.

>> This is because the heat makes me feel weak.
and I really hate a rain.

>> Also, I really hate rain.
In my country, a plenty of rain in summer.
>> In my country, there\'s plenty of rain in the summer.
So, I like the winter.

>> So I like winter.

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