What\'s your favorite season of the year?

2020-09-04 · 첨삭 강사 Jasper

학생이 쓴 원문

Dear [Name], I waited for your call after calling from my boss. because I thought, you call again after 5minites. when I disconnected your call, I asked you call after 5 minutes. I like spring, fall among 4 seasons. the two season are warming. so it is very good time to take a walk. I like to go hiking in this time. we can go to the plant festival. as you know, there are all kinds of flower in garden festival. but now, it is impossible because of COVID19. Now, if it is as like 2019, our family will go to condo in Jeju or east area in Koera. We have a lot of mountains, as I know, 70% of our country is mountain. so Korean enjoy to go to the mountain. I also enjoy going mountain every weekend. sometimes, along or with friends.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]~
I\'m sorry that I misunderstood you yesterday. I hope I was able to make it up to you in our class. Thank you for doing your homework. Keep up the good work.

Here are your corrections:

Dear [Name],

I waited for your call after calling from my boss.

>> I waited for your call after the call from my boss.

because I thought, you call again after 5minites.

>> I thought you will call me after 5 minutes.

when I disconnected your call, I asked you call after 5 minutes.

>> Before disconnecting, I asked you to call me after 5 minutes.

I like spring, fall among 4 seasons.

>> I like spring and fall among the 4 seasons.

the two season are warming. so it is very good time to take a walk.

>> Those seasons are warm and it\'s a a very good time to take a walk.

I like to go hiking in this time.

>> I like hiking at these times.

we can go to the plant festival.

>> We can also go to the plant festival.

as you know, there are all kinds of flower in garden festival.

>> As you know, there are all kinds of flower in the garden festival

but now, it is impossible because of COVID19.

>> CORRECT

Now, if it is as like 2019, our family will go to condo in Jeju or east area in Koera.

>> Nowadays, our family should\'ve been to a condo in Jeju or we\'re at the east of Korea.

We have a lot of mountains, as I know, 70% of our country is mountain.

>> CORRECT

so Korean enjoy to go to the mountain.

>> So we Koreans enjoy going to the mountains.

I also enjoy going mountain every weekend.

>> I also enjoy going to the mountain every weekends.

sometimes, along or with friends.

>> Sometimes alone and other times, with friends.

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