What\'s your favorite season? What do you like about it?
학생이 쓴 원문
My favorite season is spring.
There are four season in Korea.
The best season is spring and fall.
I like to see light green when it new sprouts from frozen land.
It\'s really beautiful and cute.
It\'s as far as wonder.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ms. [Name]! Spring and fall really do feel like the perfect balance: spring full of fresh energy, and fall with its cozy, calming vibe. What’s your favorite thing to do in spring?
-T. Sonny
My favorite season is spring.>>Correct!
There are four season in Korea.
There are four season in Korea.
>>There are four seasons in Korea.
The best season is spring and fall.
>>The best seasons are spring and fall.
I like to see light green when it new sprouts from frozen land.
>>I love to see the light green color of new sprouts growing from the frozen land.
It\'s really beautiful and cute.
It\'s really beautiful and cute.
>>Correct!
It\'s as far as wonder.
It\'s as far as wonder.
>>It feels like a wonder.
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