What’s your favorite season? Why? Explain your answer in not more than 5 sentences.
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My favorite season is winter. because I don't like hot weather and also in winter I can make a snowman and play using snow. and I can eat fish bread.
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My favorite season is winter. because I don\'t like hot weather and also in winter I can make a snowman and play using snow. and I can eat fish bread.
>> My favorite season is winter because I don\'t like the hot weather. Also, I can play with the snow and build a snowman in the winter. I can also eat fish-shaped bread (Bungeo-ppang, 붕어빵) as well.
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