What’s your favorite song? Why do you like it?
학생이 쓴 원문
There are too many songs that I like it. so it\'s too tough to choose.
If I should choose only one song, I would choose Superstition by Stevie wonder.
I like funk music, and I like the rhythm of this song.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
Thank you for your fun answer! You shared your favorite song well. Just a quick tip: be careful not to repeat words like “I like it” when “I like” is enough, and remember to capitalize names like “Stevie Wonder.” Great job, keep going!
~~Teacher Kate
There are too many songs that I like it. so it\'s too tough to choose.
>>There are too many songs that I like, so it\'s too tough to choose.
If I should choose only one song, I would choose Superstition by Stevie wonder.
>>If I had to choose only one song, I would choose Superstition by Stevie Wonder.
I like funk music, and I like the rhythm of this song.
>>CORRECT!
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