What\'s your favorite story book? Why?
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My favorite story book is Moon jae-in because it is a very good for want for president people.
So it is very fun.
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What\'s your favorite storybook? Why?
My favorite story book is Moon jae-in because it is a very good for want for president people.
>> My favorite storybook is Moon Jae-in because it is the perfect reading material for those who want to be president.
So it is very fun.
>> CORRECT~~
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