What’s your favorite thing about Australian culture?
학생이 쓴 원문
My favorite thing about Australian culture is a relaxed lifestyle.
I went to Australia for a short time when I was a university student
They didn’t work overtime and valued their time in free.
I often saw people exercising and enjoying a picnic with family in the park
They were always kind and they slowly talked to me when I get communication
Thanks to that, I got comfortable and can learned the method enjoying my life
So I remember the relaxed culture in Australia is the best.
강사 첨삭
Hello Joey, I love how you describe your experience in Australia. It’s vivid and full of personal reflection. Your sentences show that you really paid attention to the culture and how it made you feel. Most of your grammar was strong; only a few small adjustments were needed. Keep writing like this. It’s a great way to improve and sound more natural in English. You’re doing an amazing job expressing your experiences.
~ T. Lia
My favorite thing about Australian culture is a relaxed lifestyle.
>> CORRECT
I went to Australia for a short time when I was a university student
>> I went to Australia for a short time when I was a university student.
They didn’t work overtime and valued their time in free.
>> They didn’t work overtime and valued their free time.
I often saw people exercising and enjoying a picnic with family in the park
>> I often saw people exercising and enjoying a picnic with their family in the park.
They were always kind and they slowly talked to me when I get communication
>> They were always kind and spoke slowly to me when I tried to communicate.
Thanks to that, I got comfortable and can learned the method enjoying my life
>> Thanks to that, I got comfortable and learned how to enjoy life.
So I remember the relaxed culture in Australia is the best.
>> I remember that the relaxed culture in Australia is the best.
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