What's your favorite thing about the holidays?

2019-02-13 · 첨삭 강사 Fiona

학생이 쓴 원문

The best thing about holidays is to spend time with my family. It's good to spend more time with my family because it's hard to spend time with them during the week.

강사 첨삭

Hi again^^

This is the last message you sent me today^^

Well, the long holiday is over and we\'re back to reality^^


What\'s your favorite thing about the holidays?


The best thing about holidays is to spend time with my family.

>>>The best thing about a holiday is spending time with my family.
 It\'s good to spend more time with my family because it\'s hard to spend time with them during the week.

>>>CORRECT!


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