What’s your favorite thing about your home?
학생이 쓴 원문
I love making sandwiches for lunch or friends
I often prepare fresh ingredients in my fridge. arugula,tomato sundry,abocado,cabbage and cheese.
It need to take a long time,but I am willing to do.
Because it made me so happy.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ms. [Name]! That’s gourmet-level already. It sounds like making sandwiches is a little ritual of joy for you. That\'s awesome!
-T. Sonny
I love making sandwiches for lunch or friends.
>>I love making sandwiches for lunch or for friends.
I often prepare fresh ingredients in my fridge. arugula, tomato sundry, abocado, cabbage and cheese.
I often prepare fresh ingredients in my fridge. arugula, tomato sundry, abocado, cabbage and cheese.
>>I often prepare fresh ingredients from my fridge—arugula, sun-dried tomatoes, avocado, cabbage, and cheese.
It need to take a long time, but I am willing to do.
It need to take a long time, but I am willing to do.
>>It takes a long time, but I’m happy to do it.
Because it made me so happy.
Because it made me so happy.
>>Because it makes me so happy.
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