What’s your favorite thing about your home? What is your dream home?
학생이 쓴 원문
My favorite thing about my home is that my home is cozy. Because my home is warm. Also its comfortable and very expensive. Because its 562,474.89 . My dream home is 2 floor and house that have sink on outside of the bathroom. And its big and have Polishing Tile by floor. If I live in that house, I will never go to the another house.
강사 첨삭
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~ Teacher Tricia
My favorite thing about my home is that my home is cozy.
>>> My favorite thing about my home is that it\'s cozy.
Because my home is warm.
>>> CORRECT!
Also its comfortable and very expensive.
>>> Also it\'s comfortable and very expensive.
Because its 562,474.89 .
>>> Because its about 562,474.89won.
My dream home is 2 floor and house that have sink on outside of the bathroom.
>>> My dream home is a two-floor house that has a sink outside the bathroom.
And its big and have Polishing Tile by floor.
>>> And it\'s big and has polished tiles on the floor.
If I live in that house, I will never go to the another house.
>>> If I live in that kind of house, I will never go to move to a different house.
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