What’s your favorite word and why?
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-Teacher Sandy-
My favorite word is a passion.
>> My favorite word is passion
This is because I can do anything if I have a passion.
>> This is because I can do anything if I have passion.
For example, there is a person who is very skillful at math.
>> Correct.
If he does not have any passion for solving math problems, his skills will be decreased.
>> If he does not have any passion for solving math problems, his skills will decrease.
Not only that, he cannot be a brilliant person because he does not anything.
>> Not only that he cannot be a brilliant person because he does not do anything.
On the other hand, there is an another person who is not good at math but has a lot of passion for math.
>> Correct.
Even though he has to try harder than smart people, because he has a powerful passion, he will solve the math problems all day.
>> Even though he has to try harder than smart people, he will still be able to solve math problems easily because he has a powerful passion.
Then later he will become good at math than other people.
>> Then later he will become better at math than any other people.
I think a passion is very important to everyone for everything.
>> I think passion is very important to everyone and for everything.
That is why I love the word, \"passion\".
>> Correct.
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