What’s your favorite word and why?

2019-09-11 · 첨삭 강사 Sandy

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My favorite word is a passion. This is because I can do anything if I have a passion. For example, there is a person who is very skillful at math. If he does not have any passion for solving math problems, his skills will be decreased. Not only that, he cannot be a brilliant person because he does not anything. On the other hand, there is an another person who is not good at math but has a lot of passion for math. Even though he has to try harder than smart people, because he has a powerful passion, he will solve the math problems all day. Then later he will become good at math than other people. I think a passion is very important to everyone for everything. That is why I love the word, \"passion\".

강사 첨삭

Hello Chloe! Happy Wednesday! Thank you for answering the essay question. Good job!

-Teacher Sandy-

My favorite word is a passion.

>> My favorite word is passion
 This is because I can do anything if I have a passion.

>> This is because I can do anything if I have passion.
 For example, there is a person who is very skillful at math.

>> Correct.
 If he does not have any passion for solving math problems, his skills will be decreased.

>>  If he does not have any passion for solving math problems, his skills will decrease.
 Not only that, he cannot be a brilliant person because he does not anything.

>> Not only that he cannot be a brilliant person because he does not do anything.
 On the other hand, there is an another person who is not good at math but has a lot of passion for math.

>> Correct.
 Even though he has to try harder than smart people, because he has a powerful passion, he will solve the math problems all day.

>> Even though he has to try harder than smart people, he will still be able to solve math problems easily  because  he has a powerful passion.
 Then later he will become good at math than other people.

>> Then later he will become better at math than any other people.
 I think a passion is very important to everyone for everything.

>> I think passion is very important to everyone and for everything.
 That is why I love the word, \"passion\".

>> Correct.

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