What\'s your hobby?
학생이 쓴 원문
I have many kinds of hobbies.
I like reading books, so I run a reading club with my acquaintances.
After we read the book, we write a review and disscuss specific topics once a month.
I exercise over 30 minutes at home everyday because I can\'t go to the gym.
I like play the flute almost everyday.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름],
Thank you again for today\'s homework!
Have a nice morning and talk to you later!
Teacher ELLY.
What\'s your hobby?
I have many kinds of hobbies.CORRECT!
or>>I am into various types of hobbies.
I like reading books, so I run a reading club with my acquaintances.
CORRECT!
or>>I enjoy reading books, so I organized a reading club with my acquaintances.
After we read the book, we write a review and discuss specific topics once a month.
CORRECT!
or>>After finishing a book, we write a review. In addition, discuss specific topics each month.
I exercise over 30 minutes at home every day because I can\'t go to the gym.CORRECT!
or>>I exercise at home for more than 30 minutes on a daily basis because I can\'t go to a fitness center.
I like play the flute almost everyday.
I like play the flute almost everyday.
>>I like playing the flute almost every day.
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