What\'s your hometown like?
학생이 쓴 원문
My birthplace is An-yang.
But I moved to Gun-po at 1year old.
I think my hometown is Gun-po.
Ithink Gun-po citizen is very friendly,and help them each other.
So l like Gun-po.
강사 첨삭
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Jean~~
What\'s your hometown like?
My birthplace is An-yang.
>> OR: I was born in An-yang.
But I moved to Gun-po at 1year old.
>> But my family moved to Gun-po when I was 1 year old.
I think my hometown is Gun-po.
>> So I think my hometown is Gun-po.
Ithink Gun-po citizen is very friendly,and help them each other.
>> I believe Gun-po citizens or locals are very friendly and help each other.
So l like Gun-po.
>> OR: That\'s why I like Gun-po.
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