What’s your idea of a perfect weekend?
학생이 쓴 원문
I love my family stay at home on weekend.
I like usually to cook at home and my family love the food too.
I am so happy the time.
We share delicious dish talk about various things together.
I think life is now,love is spending time together.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ms. [Name]! It’s nice how you value spending quality time together, whether it’s enjoying good dishes or just chatting about life. Do you have a favorite dish to cook for your family on weekends?
-T. Sonny
I love my family stay at home on weekend.
>>I love having my family stay at home on weekends.
I like usually to cook at home and my family love the food too.
I like usually to cook at home and my family love the food too.
>>I usually like to cook at home, and my family loves the food too.
I am so happy the time.
I am so happy the time.
>>I feel so happy during that time.
We share delicious dish talk about various things together.
>>We share delicious dishes and talk about various things together.
I think life is now,love is spending time together.
I think life is now,love is spending time together.
>>I think life is now, and love is spending time together.
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