What\'s your ideal Korean New Year? Explain?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think the my ideal Korean New Year is get together with my familly and play fun game.
And eating a delicious food.
강사 첨삭
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Jean~~
What\'s your ideal Korean New Year? Explain?
I think the my ideal Korean New Year is get together with my familly and play fun game. And eating a delicious food.
>> I think my ideal Korean New Year is to get together with my family, play fun games, and eat delicious food.
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