What’s your ideal weekend?

2021-02-02 · 첨삭 강사 James

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I think my ideal week end is Together my famliy eating delicious food and chatting pass the time And at alone organize one week plan. Sometimes I went to go to the gym exercise . My ideal weekend is very simple. Bue it is most happy.

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon [이름] [이름]! Thank you so much for your thoughts regarding this topics. I appreciate it. 
Sincerely
T. James
I think my ideal week end is
>>> I think my ideal weekend is 
Together my famliy eating delicious food and chatting pass the time
>>> together with my family eating delicious food and chatting about our past life. 
And at alone organize one week plan.
>>> And to alone organize one week\'s plan.
Sometimes I went to go to the gym exercise .
>>> Sometimes I just go to the gym to exercise.
My ideal weekend is very simple
>>> CORRECT
Bue it is most happy.
>>> but, it is the happiest weekend for me. 

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