What\'s your longest bicycle ride?
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2 years ago, I started to ride a bicycle. I had no work at that time. so I spent all time for riding & running.
Near by my house, there is a way for bicycle riding, so if I want to ride, I can use this way.
this way is connected from my house to Seoul area.
Maybe within one hour, I can go to Seoul. It may be 20km from my house.
I tried to go to National Assembly by bicycle two years ago. I thought it took 3 hours to get there.
But I was not tired, I was very happy to achieve it.
When I came back at home, the wind was opposite direction. so it was very difficult to go home, as I thought.
Do you like to ride a bicycle? I like it very much. Speed, good scenery, opposite wind with cooling, it is a catharsis feeling.
Sometimes, I go to ride a bicycle with my wife. but she could not go uphill road. so I alway wait for my wife like the way.
I say a joke to my wife. your leg is from China. Do you know why?
China is almost flat ground. so if you ride a motocycle
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Wow you have a very long answer today. Good job on that.
Wow you have a very long answer today. Good job on that.
Here are your corrections:
>> CORRECT
I had no work at that time. so I spent all time for riding & running.
>> I had no work at that time so I spent all my time in riding and running.
>> There\'s a bicycle lane near my house so if I want to ride my bicycle, I use that lane.
>> This road is connected from my house to the Seoul area.
>> CORRECT
It may be 20km from my house.
>> CORRECT
>> I tried to go to the National Assembly for bicycles two years ago.
I thought it took 3 hours to get there.But I was not tired, I was very happy to achieve it.
>> It took us 3 hours to get there but I didn\'t feel tired and I was very happy to achieve it.
When I came back at home, the wind was opposite direction. so it was very difficult to go home, as I thought.
>> When I came back home, the wind was blowing on the opposite directions so it was very difficult to get home.
Do you like to ride a bicycle?
>> Do you like riding a bicycle?
I like it very much. Speed, good scenery, opposite wind with cooling, it is a catharsis feeling.
>> I like it very much, the speed, the beautiful scenery, the cool wind, and the catharsis feeling.
>> Sometimes, I and my wife ride our bicycles but she couldn\'t go uphill so I always wait for her.
>> I tell my wife that her leg is from China as a joke.
Do you know why?
>> CORRECT
China is almost flat ground. so if you ride a motocycle
>> China has a flat ground but they still ride a motorcycle.
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