What\'s your most valued possession?
학생이 쓴 원문
When I was young, my favorite item is game machine.
However nowadays, my favorite item is my house.
Actually, my house is not my own. but I spent a lot of money to house as deposit.
So, my house is most valued.
강사 첨삭
Good evening, [이름]!^^
Thank you for sharing your most valued possession. I hope that you can build a lot of good memories in your home.
~Kelly^^
When I was young, my favorite item is game machine.
>> Correct.
However nowadays, my favorite item is my house.
>> Correct.
Actually, my house is not my own. but I spent a lot of money to house as deposit.
>> Actually, my house is not my own, but I spent a lot of money in paying the house deposit.
So, my house is most valued.
>> So my house is my most valued possession.
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