What's your most valued possession?
학생이 쓴 원문
my most valued possession is photo.
because it helps to remember my emotion and memory at that time.
i have lost my cellphone when i was highschool student.
at that time, i was really sad. because i lost my photos too....
so after that happening, i share my photos on icloud.
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my most valued possession is photo.
>> My most valued possessions are my photos.
because it helps to remember my emotion and memory at that time.
>> It helps me remember the good memories I had.
i have lost my cellphone when i was highschool student.
>> I lost my cellphone when I was a high school student.
at that time, i was really sad. because i lost my photos too....
>> At that time, I was really sad because I lost my photos too.
so after that happening, i share my photos on icloud.
>> After what happened, I started uploading my photos on iCloud.
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