What\'s your opinion about this? Dr. T.P. Chia said: \"A competitive person is always a winner. An u

2019-05-22 · 첨삭 강사 May

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I don\'t fully agree with the quote, because a competitive person is not always successful what he/she is doing. I think it is a really serious social problem that cause people being more competitive. I have watched a lot of TV program that went on the air. It is all about a competition. As a viewer, competitive program is joyful but it looks that our society encourage people being competitive. If we didn\'t, we might become a loser. I think that we should pay more attention to the loser than winner on the contest. Because I believe that failure teaches success. Nobody can be successful without failure.

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Thanks for answering the question [이름]! Yes. I agree with your answer. Not all competitive people are winners.

Just keep on doing your best. ^^

~~Teacher May~~

I don\'t fully agree with the quote, because a competitive person is not always successful what he/she is doing.

>> I don\'t fully agree with the quote, because a competitive person is not always successful.

I think it is a really serious social problem that cause people being more competitive.

>> I think it is really a serious social problem that causes people to be more competitive.

I have watched a lot of TV program that went on the air.

>> I have watched a lot of TV programs on TV.

It is all about a competition.

>> It is a competition.

As a viewer, competitive program is joyful but it looks that our society encourage people being competitive.

>> As a viewer, a competitive program is joyful but it looks that our society encourages people to be more competitive.

If we didn\'t, we might become a loser.

>> CORRECT

I think that we should pay more attention to the loser than winner on the contest. Because I believe that failure teaches success.

>> I think that we should pay more attention to the loser than the winner in the contest, because I believe that failure teaches success.

Nobody can be successful without failure.

>> Nobody can be successful without a failure.

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