What\'s your opinion about this? Dr. T.P. Chia said: \"A competitive person is always a winner. An u
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Thanks for answering the question [이름]! Yes. I agree with your answer. Not all competitive people are winners.
Just keep on doing your best. ^^
~~Teacher May~~
I don\'t fully agree with the quote, because a competitive person is not always successful what he/she is doing.
>> I don\'t fully agree with the quote, because a competitive person is not always successful.
I think it is a really serious social problem that cause people being more competitive.
>> I think it is really a serious social problem that causes people to be more competitive.
I have watched a lot of TV program that went on the air.
>> I have watched a lot of TV programs on TV.
It is all about a competition.
>> It is a competition.
As a viewer, competitive program is joyful but it looks that our society encourage people being competitive.
>> As a viewer, a competitive program is joyful but it looks that our society encourages people to be more competitive.
If we didn\'t, we might become a loser.
>> CORRECT
I think that we should pay more attention to the loser than winner on the contest. Because I believe that failure teaches success.
>> I think that we should pay more attention to the loser than the winner in the contest, because I believe that failure teaches success.
Nobody can be successful without failure.
>> Nobody can be successful without a failure.
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