What’s your opinion of people who choose not to have children?
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Many people want to have a happy family.
>>CORRECT!
>>Majority wants to have a happy family.
They want to have a children and be good parents.
>>They want to have children and be good parents.
But people want to be only a husband and wife.
>>But some people want to only have a husband and wife.
It is also happy family.
>>CORRECT!
>>It is also a happy family.
Some couples don’t want to have children.
>>CORRECT!
I think there are some reason.
>>CORRECT!
>>I think there are some few reasons.
First, they don’t like children.
>>CORRECT!
Also, they think they can’t be a good parents.
>>Also, they think they can’t be good parents.
Like these things, they have reason why they don’t want to have children.
>>CORRECT!
I think we should respect their opinion because we don’t have the right to interfere their life.
>> I think we should respect their opinion because we don’t have the right to interfere in their lives.
We can’t take responsibility for their life.
>>CORRECT!
So, we don’t have qualified to argue about that.
>>So, we are not qualified to argue about it.
Also, not to be parents is better than to be bad parents.
>> CORRECT!
Children can’t choose parents by themselves.
>>CORRECT!
>> Children can’t choose their parents.
It is very unlucky life to meet a bad parents like child abuser.
>>It is very unlucky life to meet bad parents like child abuser.
So, if people don’t want to have children because they are not to be good parents, it is good choice for everyone.
>> So, if people don’t want to have children because they are not good parents, it is good choice for everyone.
For country, many new birth is good news, but it is individual choice which no one can’t interfere.
>>For some countries, many new birth is good news, but it is individual\'s choice which no one can’t interfere.
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